Khurshid A.'s Linkedin Analytics

Most coaches suck in their posts. (Even one of my clients messed up too.) They're writing like it’s a blog site, not LinkedIn. Here’s what ruins your reach fast: → Bulky paragraphs that block the view → Language that sounds like a boardroom → Jargon your audience doesn’t understand Most coaches I see here on LinkedIn... → Post for the sake of posting → Without thinking about the audience Here’s the truth: Your audience doesn’t read your post. They scan it. And the way you write makes it hard to scan. That’s why your posts get ignored ...and you don’t get visibility. Here’s how I improved my client’s posts: 1. Keep it simple → No fancy words 2. Add enough white space → Give the reader time to breathe 3. Avoid 3+ lines per paragraph → Use bullet points if needed 4. Use listicles (like this one!) → Easier to read and digest 5. Skip the emoji clutter → 🫡🙏❌🙌 🚀. 6. Use shorter sentences  → Let them get the point. 7.  Always follow rule of one → One post = One message How you write > What you write Write so people get the message Quickly. Clearly. Easily. Before you hit publish on your next post, ask: “Can my audience scan this post?” If the answer is no, refine it. Make it better. What’s one common mistake you see in LinkedIn posts?

5 Simple ways that I use to get content ideas 1. Jot down question my clients ask on Call → Client: “We post but get no leads.” → Post idea: “Why your LinkedIn posts aren’t bringing leads” 2. Look for the questions you ICP asks on comments  → Comment: “This was helpful, but how do I DM others?” → Post idea: “3 steps you can follow while DMing others” 3. Questions your ICP ask in your DM  → DM: “Hey, can you help me on writing hooks?” → Post idea: “Here’s how I write hooks in 3 mins or less” 4. Mistakes that you made in your journey. → Mistake: “You launched a course—no sales.” → Post idea: “I built a course. No one bought. Here’s why.” 5. Industry trends that’s going on  → Trends: “AI-generated scripts go viral.” → Post idea: “Why AI can write but not connect” You are full of ideas. All you need is to have a system that collects them all. “Better the ideas, better the outcomes” Ps:- What else you will add?

It took me 50+ calls and 100+ rejections to learn this (Now you can learn it within 45 second) Earlier, when I used to DM potential clients, I was desperate. → Desperate to close them. → Desperate to sell my services. → Desperate to prove my value. Even during sales calls, I focused all on me: → What I wanted.  → How do I sell it? And guess what? Clients could feel it, and I’ve lost a bunch of clients. Fast forward to today, After doing 50+ sales call After getting rejected by 100+ People I’ve learned one powerful mindset shift: Clients don’t want to be sold. They want to be served. Now, when I talk to a potential client, my only goal is to help them. → Even if they don’t pay me → Even if they’re not ready → Even if they’re not the right fit I still offer genuine advice and guide them towards what’s best for them. . This simple shift from selling to serving has changed everything for me. And since then ✅ I’ve signed 8+ deals. ✅ I’ve built better relationships. ✅ I’ve become a better person. ✅ I’ve built a 5000 + community. And the funny thing? The more you stop chasing, The more opportunities start chasing you.

After experimenting with dozens of hooks (Here’s what I realized) 3 things always make a hook compelling Most of the hooks I’ve written have failed. Some made little sense. But the best ones? After analyzing a bunch of my posts. I found all the best posts had 3 things in common in their hooks. They always had these 3 parts: → A real person (Like “I” or “You”) → A clear pain (A problem your reader feels) → A sharp number (My #1, 5 tips, 3 rules, etc) It sounds basic. But it's not. Because vague hooks sound smart… But they don’t speak to real people. Example? ❌ “Here’s how to write better” → Too broad. ✅ “3 writing rules that got me 100k Impressions”  → (Person + Pain + Number.) That’s when your hook attracts people. It makes people pause. It makes people think: “This is for me.” So, here’s what I’ve learned: → Don’t try to be clever. → Try to be clear and relatable. → Speak like a friend, not a lecturer. If you write hooks like that... Your posts won’t just get seen. They’ll get read by your People. P.S. These 3 elements made my best posts. Try them once. You’ll never go back.

Here’s how I revamped Maria OCallaghan's Profile Maria wanted her LinkedIn profile to truly reflect her value as a trusted partner to top executives and high-net-worth individuals. Her old profile wasn’t showcasing her → Strengths,  → Experience,  → And potential. After deeply understanding her goals, her clients’ pain points, and her brand → I realigned her entire profile, top to bottom. Now, her Profile reflects her full potential → Her experience shines through → Her leadership is clear → Her capability and achievements. When you align what you offer with what you showcase, you don’t just update your profile — you open your full potential. Want the same for your LinkedIn? DM me OPTIMIZE — and let’s make it happen.

Lately, I started working on Lena Thompson Profile Here’s what I saw in her profile before we collaborated. → Her messaging was not to the point in her profile → Her profile wasn't showcasing her full potential. → It doesn’t have any call to action for her visitors. Here’s what I did to showcase his full potential. → Changed her messaging to instantly communicate her value. → Added social proof that positions her as the go-to Person. → Built a strategic CTA so her ICP knows exactly what to do next. → And yes, we added eye-catching graphics that take attention. Your LinkedIn profile isn’t a resume. It’s a sales asset. It opens new opportunities for you even when you are sleeping.  It pulls in the right people before you ever send a message. If your profile is not showing your full potential. Let’s fix it  DM me “Optimize11” (Only taking 3 clients this month) Let your profile speak for you, so you don’t have to.

One worst mistake that I’ve seen people make  (Even I made it → It costs you credibility) Most people preach what they’ve never done. They say things they’ve only heard. They post tips they’ve never used. They copy words from folks they don’t even know. You might get likes doing that. But no one will trust you. No one will follow you for you. It’s so easy to change that, you just need to → Add personal experience → Add Personal Opinion.  → Add Person beliefs. Here’s how to stop being noise: 1. Share what you've used → Even once is better than none 2. Share what you do → Even if it’s still messy 3. Share what you believe → Even if no one else does When you do this… That’s when you sound like “you” not others. And people want to know “you” not  the copied version of others. When you sound like “you”.  That’s when you speak with heart and proof. 📌 P.S. Don’t just post. Show what you know. That’s what wins.